Sunday, June 7, 2015

Fear and Discord

Fear and Discord


Scene List
Scene 2
Scene 4
Scene 18
Scene 19
Scene 20


Character List










Scene 4
Ally between two apartment building at 8:37. 22 year old woman trying to get in to one of the doors. 6 foot 8- 16 year old walking towards her 

Marc: Hello
Chloe: who are you?-what are you doing here?
Marc: I am here to take you to school, little one.
Chloe: who are you?
Marc: Marc.
Chloe: What?
Marc: Marc.
Chloe: I know, but whats your last name?
Marc: Haines.
Chloe: My god. It’s you. [in surprise}
Marc: What?
Chloe:M-M-Megan[stuttering] 
Marc: who?
Chloe: y-you t-took her a-away[stuttering]
Marc:[worrying] I have no idea what you talking about.
Chloe: [Faints]































Scene 6
sir: Jack, the new subjects just came in last night. 
Jack: Whats there number?
sir: 18 and 19.
Jack: wow, that many.
sir: there being evaluated right now.

cut to: 18 in interrogation chamber 1

Landon: Hello Javid my name is Rodolfo Landon.
Javid: Hello sir
Landon: Call me Rodolfo

cut to: 19 in testing chamber 3

Valentina: Chloe, hello, how are you.
Valentina: Im Margret Valentina
Chloe: My friends name was Margret.
Valentina: Interesting
Valentina: What can you do.
Chloe: Nothing; I am useless, nobody knows who i am any more 
Valentina: I sure you can do something.
Chloe: ok, fine 

cut to: sir and Jack in break room

Jack: how did you find them?
sir: The recruiter, Marc, brought them in.
Jack: wow, Marc? really?
sir: yeah.
Jack: where’d he find them?
sir: he didn’t say.
Jack: Thats worrying.


cut to: interrogation chamber 1

Javid: Why am I here.
Landon: Im sorry but i can't tell you 
Javid: why.
Landon: [firmly] Im sorry but I can not tell you.
Javid: [yelling] Tell me!

cut to: testing chamber 3

Ground stars to shake.

cut to: interrogation chamber 1

Landon: Stop it Stop It Stop It!![ Landon screaming]
Javid: No
[Landon passes out]

cut to: testing chamber 3

Chloe: this is what I can do.
[testing chamber 3 collapses, Valentina Trapped under ruble]
Valentina:[screams in agony]
Chloe: I don’t have friends any more







Scene 18

Javid acting like a normal person.

Javid: “Hello there Mister, are you lost? What’s your name? Can I help you?”
Sir:  “I am sorry but I can not disclose my name“ 
“ Can you give me directions to a small farm around here.”
Javid: “Which farm?”
Sir: “Maybergs”
Javid: “North 28 miles and then turn left, whatever you do not turn right.”
Sir: “Why not right?”
Javid: “That’s where the Alexander’s Old Farm is”
Sir: “Why did they leave?”
Javid: “I can’t tell you.”
Sir: “Why?”
Javid: “I just can’t tell you now get on your way.”
Sir: “Fine, Fine I’ll go.”


















Scene 19
Black SUV driving down dusty dirt roads man on phone inside.

Sir: I’m on my way to CH 19
Jack: Discord?”
Sir: You know, I think that nickname caused her to go rogue
Jack:  Ah sorry, by the way, how did you find her?
Sir:   Seriously what happened to you Ch 8 get to you?
The chip that is in her, you know the tracing chip.
Jack:  Oh I forgot about that, sorry.
Sir: Stop it!
Jack: Stop what? 
Sir: Saying sorry all the time
Jack: Sorry
[Phone hangs up]








Scene 20
Fear and Discord
Barn in an overgrown field next to a long dirt road, small farm house down the road. Black SUV parked on dirt road with man next to it. There is girl in her mid twenties standing next to the barn.

Sir:   Hello [walking towards Chloe]
Chloe:   Who are you?” [limping slowly towards the house]
Sir:  You know who I am Chloe
Chloe:  I’m not Chloe, I am not Chloe running towards the house shaking her head.  [starts to scream.] 
[SUV implodes and sir is thrown towards the barn.]
Chloe:  [stops turns toward Sir.] I am not Chloe! 
[Barn explodes Sir thrown in field]
Chloe:   I will not go back. I will not go back, I will not go
back!!! [Screaming]
Sir: [Crawling away in fear] I won’t bring you back, now please, stop.
Chloe:  No I won’t stop!  
[Sir explodes]
Chloe: [Quietly says to ear peace] Sir is gone.
Javid: [Thru micraphone] good.

Chapter 1 secrets and lies- Hatred of my Secrets

Valentina had been wandering for days looking for victor

Saturday, June 6, 2015

Characters in Hatred of my Secrets

Characters in  Hatred of my Secrets (book 1 in the Treadway chronicles)


Main characters
Valentina Treadway, female, 15, lives in Clayton 
Victor Moss, male, 15,  North Columbia
Rex Murphy, male, 15  South Fields
Wendy Fields, 15, female, South Columbia
Quentin Sorrell, Male, 12, Columbia

Other characters
Orson Treadway, male, 37, father of Valentina 
Harper Treadway, female, 35, mother of Valentina  
Juniper Treadway, female, 18, sister of Valentina  
Augustus Treadway, male, 79, step father of Orson Treadway, father of Clover Moss, lives in North Columbia
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Conrad Moss, 34, male,  father of Victor Moss
Clover Moss, 33, female,  mother of Victor Moss
Isla Moss, 15, female, Sister of Victor Moss, friend of Wendy Fields
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Alexandra Murphy, Female, 38, Stepmother of Rex Murphy, Sister of Harper Treadway
Jason Murphy, male, 40, Father of Rex Murphy, Brother of Elliot Fields
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Elliot Fields, male, 35, father of Wendy Fields.

Lindsey Fields, female, Mother of Wendy Fields